Tuesday 19 August 2008

Tokyo, a poem?

A tired sombre suited man
Uses an embroidered pink lacy fan

Girls in traditional Kimono dress
Teeter precariously on a wooden wedge

Shinto shrines here there and yonder
Pilgrims ask for blessings, filled with wonder

Incense burning fills the senses
Children so respectful, they seem so selfless

Eateries clamour to grab your attention
Japanese sushi is worth a mention

Rush hour scurries with people in suits
Go in to a bar, please take off your shoes

Cyclists fly past with a Ding of their bell
Too close to call, they know all too well

Breakfast of noodles, miso soup or rice
Crazy people, I think toast would be nice!

Market stall vendors tempt with their wares
We can't communicate well, they don't seem to care

Bright lights of Shibuya, neon signs are so modern
We stayed in Asakusa, more traditional we learn

So Tokyo is filled with contradictory aspects
We look forward to seeing Japan's other landscapes

Full stop
F Castellani

3 comments:

Unknown said...

Wonderful words Fran. Conjured up so many images of a country I would love to visit one day (SOOO GREEN!).

Keep sending...

Dx

p.s. why the question mark in title... it was a great poem!

Anonymous said...

well done my little poet!
made good reading and did conjure up an image of a beautiful place
xxx

Anonymous said...

i do believe ur poem is trying to tell me that 'shinto' is actually a real word... ad will be pleased as he is the origanal shin-toe.
that boy still cant kik a football peace out x